Another great chapter here Vanessa. You used the backstory section well to break up the tension and again found the way to build the piece to a climax and leave me ready for the next one! And as i am catching today on back reading, the next one is ready for me without wait! Nicely done.
Another great chapter here Vanessa. You used the backstory section well to break up the tension and again found the way to build the piece to a climax and leave me ready for the next one! And as i am catching today on back reading, the next one is ready for me without wait! Nicely done.