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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

This builds nicely on the foundation of the first chapter and introduces a magnificently creepy element, the puppet. I like it.

I would change "Can she know" to "Does she know" but that's mere preference.

Nathan Slake's avatar

"In an underground city without trees, amber is more precious than silver or gemstones. A clan envoy, then."

This is very well executed. Such a simple line, but it adds worldbuilding and context in an efficient, clever way.

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