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Great start of the scene Vanessa. I love the world building you bring into these stories, not just the external surroundings, but the lore such as even modest light can cause possible blindness. There is such a richness in the construction of the characters relationship to the world that brings both a familiarity and a strangeness that comes across as effortless. And while you are challenged by developing relationships, I would note that you are bringing to life the clans, the individuals, and the independent goals of each character in a way that is resonating with me. Thanks again for keeping the posting up!

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