An atmospheric scene with the bathhouse. We get a bit of insight into the clan society and into the paranoid mind of Yun as well as Usira's curiosity, which may yet turn the moth hunter into the moth, I esp. liked that imagery, it adds depth to the characterisation.
I prefer having at least a bit of a plan of where the story is headed, especially for longer projects... The current plan is to hop back & forth between Usira's & Yun's perspectives because there will likely be a lot of interesting story only one of them will experience. I'm pretty happy with third person limited but I think having two POV characters instead of one will be more fun for this particular story.
An atmospheric scene with the bathhouse. We get a bit of insight into the clan society and into the paranoid mind of Yun as well as Usira's curiosity, which may yet turn the moth hunter into the moth, I esp. liked that imagery, it adds depth to the characterisation.
Thank you!
I prefer having at least a bit of a plan of where the story is headed, especially for longer projects... The current plan is to hop back & forth between Usira's & Yun's perspectives because there will likely be a lot of interesting story only one of them will experience. I'm pretty happy with third person limited but I think having two POV characters instead of one will be more fun for this particular story.